Dusk Posted May 4, 2007 Share #1 Posted May 4, 2007 I am a closet poet. I don't share much of what I write. After reading about Tom I felt compelled to write. I hope this came out Ok. For Tom E and all that are missed A friend was taken from me today He lived far away I never met him face to face Though he would visit me at my place Across cyber space we became friends Shared stories of ventures far and wide Chatted as if we sat side by side We joked and laughed late into the night I'd go to bed with a smile before I turned out the light He road off on a ride one day A careless person took him away A driver in a cage made a turn In the end a sad lesson learned With two eyes and two ears he failed to see, the friend he took away from me In gods kingdom he now rides Endless ventures far and wide One day we shall meet Face to face we will speak A warm place I do keep, for my friend as I sleep I dream of ventures far and wide With my friend by my side Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carbon_One Posted May 4, 2007 Share #2 Posted May 4, 2007 Very nice & well wrttien Dusk. Larry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kbran Posted May 4, 2007 Share #3 Posted May 4, 2007 Very good indeed. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chabicheka Posted May 4, 2007 Share #4 Posted May 4, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fixit3546 Posted May 4, 2007 Share #5 Posted May 4, 2007 Well Spoken................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfie Posted May 4, 2007 Share #6 Posted May 4, 2007 Very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hipshot Posted May 4, 2007 Share #7 Posted May 4, 2007 time to come out of the closet. very good! just jt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marcarl Posted May 4, 2007 Share #8 Posted May 4, 2007 I like it, says it well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squidley Posted May 4, 2007 Share #9 Posted May 4, 2007 Very nice Dusk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eck Posted May 4, 2007 Share #10 Posted May 4, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yama Mama Posted May 4, 2007 Share #11 Posted May 4, 2007 Beautifuly written. Peggy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaltyDawg Posted May 4, 2007 Share #12 Posted May 4, 2007 Very Very nice. Gave me chills. Awesome job. Wayne Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ladyrider Posted May 4, 2007 Share #13 Posted May 4, 2007 I am touched to tears. Tom, oh, Tom I wish you were here to know all this love you did not know people had for you. Oh my darling, I cling to the day we meet at the tree of life. I pray God keeps us faithful to Him. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT POEM! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mavericksix Posted May 4, 2007 Share #14 Posted May 4, 2007 Very well said. Semper Fi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tnventurer Posted May 4, 2007 Share #15 Posted May 4, 2007 Touching, very nice....Fred Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mini-muffin Posted May 4, 2007 Share #16 Posted May 4, 2007 Very Nice and very well put. Margaret Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragracer Posted May 4, 2007 Share #17 Posted May 4, 2007 http://www.freesmileys.org/emo/sad010.gif http://www.freesmileys.org/emo/sad035.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Just-Jack Posted May 4, 2007 Share #18 Posted May 4, 2007 That was very nicely written thanks for sharing that wonderful poem Jessie:2132: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
1 - UP Posted May 4, 2007 Share #19 Posted May 4, 2007 thanks For Sharing Your Thoughts. It Was Very Nice And Well Writen. ken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
instructor Posted May 4, 2007 Share #20 Posted May 4, 2007 that was an excellent poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tommy Posted May 4, 2007 Share #21 Posted May 4, 2007 what can I say?.....good job. Well thought out and, well written. My heart is broken for Sherry.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ladyrider Posted April 30, 2008 Share #22 Posted April 30, 2008 still missing Tom. Hey you guys and gals, hug that driver tight and give him or her a big kiss...isn't it sweet? Yessiree, it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eagleeye Posted April 30, 2008 Share #23 Posted April 30, 2008 I first read this now, Very Nice Steve Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midrsv Posted April 30, 2008 Share #24 Posted April 30, 2008 Very nice Dusk, gave me chills reading it. That needs to be published somewhere with full credit given. DT Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonRider Posted April 30, 2008 Share #25 Posted April 30, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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